Incorrect translation

[SimonPilkington]

watanagashi/dev/Update (voice only)/wata_008.txt

Line 128 in fe3c980

NULL, "\"I did great.", Line_WaitForInput);

Mion is talking about Keiichi here, not herself. The Japanese sentence has no subject, but Mion is answering Rena's question about how Keiichi did, therefore it only makes sense that she is talking about him.

watanagashi/dev/Update (voice only)/wata_008.txt

Line 1700 in fe3c980

NULL, "\"Nice! The older guys are getting into it, too!", Line_WaitForInput);

Here Mion is using おじさん to refer to herself as she usually does, not to random older guys.

[SimonPilkington]

watanagashi/dev/Update (voice only)/wata_tips_16.txt

Line 44 in fe3c980

NULL, " ......You've got that right!", Line_WaitForInput);

This line is also problematic at best. ですよね here has the meaning of: "Yes, I thought not." As in: "Of course he wouldn't be visiting right now."

[SimonPilkington]

watanagashi/dev/Update (voice only)/omake_02.txt

Line 1829 in fe3c980

//「と、言うわけなの＠だからね、圭一くんの自分の胸に聞いてみてほしいんだけど......。＠

More problems here. と言うわけなのis a trailing sentence indicating Rena was just explaining to Keiichi what they were thinking, so something like: "... Is what we were thinking," would be more natural.

"Anyway, Keiichi-kun, you should try asking your own heart..." Is also incorrect for what follows. だからね follows Rena's explaining their thoughts to Keiichi, so it should become a 'so', not 'anyway'. 'Anyway' implies that what was just said is unrelated. "You should try asking your own heart..." Is a just a literal translation of the Japanese sentence. Rena is asking him to try thinking about it, not saying anything that indirect, not that it even sounds like English. "We'd like you to try thinking about it," or something like that.