Additional typos and minor corrections

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More typos and corrections from .xao

General:
Setting the Adventure:
“extending a three hour jaunt to a six hour trudge” conflicts with what Byscilla says in Quest: The Descendant: “it's more like a day and a half's walk”
☑️changed to "half a day's walk" in byscilla's commentary to align better.

Character Biographies
Danos' Bodyguard Retinue:
Telltales do not have associated skill check skills, they are hinted at in the description, but the other NPCs say it outright.
➖ Spun out into separate issue
Usk, the Shattered Butler:
“how to quiets the movements” should probably be “how it quiets the movements” this is also true on the Usk’s Raven Cloak item description itself.
“At the young age of fifty was sent” should probably be “At the young age of fifty he was sent”
“My Lord's grand-daughter. ” has an extra space after the period
☑️done
Vostolas, the Archivist
Evening - “S05. Vostolas's Office. Vostolas” missing what he is doing here.
☑️done
Lyranth, Sculptor of Kavamatis
“monster that killed Lyranth and Beautiful, and was driven out” unsure, maybe “monster that killed Lyranth the Beautiful, and was driven out”
Routine - Morning - “spends her evening” should be “spends her morning”
Routine - Mid-day - “spends her evening” should be “spends her mid-day”
❌Routine - Evening - “to take wine” should probably be “to drink wine”
☑️done

Items:
Lurking Death
“You attack gains a +1 bonus” should be “Your attack gains a +1 bonus”
☑️done
Shadeward Manor
Map:
Library stairs could use an up arrow map note.
❌Personal preference, some of the map notes are centered in rooms but this hides the art. I personally moved them slightly off center. I did this in the Foyer, Reliquary, and Vostolas's Office for example, because I wanted to see what the journal was describing.
First Floor - The Northern Courtyard map note does not open a journal page (maybe intended)
☑️done
S04. Library:
“It matches it color and style” should be “It matches in color and style”
☑️done
S09. Trophy Room:
☑️“follow any at move” should probably be “follow any that move”

S10. Lounge
“harp to the southeast” should be “harp to the northwest”
❌It also describes the servant being at the harp, but the token is by the door.

S10a. The Central Stair
❌“the magics inform you” I think could be “the magic informs you”

S32. Immaculate Walkways:
☑️“rising the the rippling water.” should be “rising from the rippling water.”?
☑️“holds a bowl aloft, in her off-hand” I feel should be two sentences. “holds a bowl aloft. In her off-hand,”

Quest: A Shadow of Hospitality:
☑️“Missing Image (Of Usk, bad image link)
☑️““tasks with the house’s Onyx Knights” should say “tasks which the house’s Onyx Knights”

Event: Meeting Lyranth:
❌Petrifying Gaze Description: shows “the {creature}” a lot. Kind of confusing for example: “the {creature} can force the creature”. Looks like if the ability is not on an actual monster this happens because it appears fine in Lyranth’s actual features.
☑️“While Lyranth does have capacity (and regularly does) create” bad grammar although it sounds right when reading it, so maybe not worth changing.
The different reactions she gives are presented in Adventure Narrative blocks, but I don’t think we should be reading all of her inner thoughts to the players? ➖ Spun out into separate issue

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