From b0f1e3e03557ca632db6ac81ccc1c3cda4418322 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Barbara Mejia <121771735+e-BaMaMe@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 27 Oct 2024 21:23:03 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Revised text access.md
grammar and punctuation
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source/content/remote_service_features/access.md | 12 ++++++------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/source/content/remote_service_features/access.md b/source/content/remote_service_features/access.md
index 47e7411..9e8d705 100644
--- a/source/content/remote_service_features/access.md
+++ b/source/content/remote_service_features/access.md
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ This is a crucial feature remote services provide and is handled somewhat somewh
We will discuss this feature in some more detail in the section [Organizing Projects](../organizing_and_more/index.md#organizing-projects) but in short:
{% endif %}
-Remote services like GitLab and GitHub, do not just allow repository owners to give access to a repository they host, but they offer:
+Remote services like GitLab and GitHub, not only allow repository owners to grant access to hosted repositories, but they also offer:
-- **fine grained access control** to both content and functions or actions
-- provide controlled **access on organisational levels** ranging over multiple repositories
-- allow to **further distribute access** rights
-- **protect certain resources** (e.g protected `main` branch)
-- **automate access control** by integrating with enterprise identity providers.
+- **fine-grained access control** over content, functions and actions,
+- controlled **access at an organizational level** across multiple repositories,
+- the ability to **further distribute access** rights,
+- **protection for specific resources** (e.g protected `main` branch), and
+- **automated access control** though integration with enterprise identity providers.