rephrasing Tue Nov 21 20:10:12 CET 2023

content/en/storage-providers/manage/others/index.md

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ toc: true
 
 ## Maintenance mode
 
-Maintenance mode provides an easy and fast to immediately stop accepting any types of deals both storage and retrieval deals (graphsync / bitswap / http). 
+Maintenance mode provides an easy and fast way to stop accepting any kind of deals  : storage, retrieval (graphsync / bitswap / http). 
 
-Activation of maintenance mode results in the automatic rejection of all deals received by a miner. 
+The activation of maintenance mode take effect immediatelly and results in the automatic rejection of all deals. 
 
 To toggle maintenance mode on or off, utilize the switch located on the top navigation bar.
 
@@ -26,28 +26,29 @@ To toggle maintenance mode on or off, utilize the switch located on the top navi
 Limits serve as a protective measure for the miner, preventing the sealing pipeline to be overloaded. 
 
 Limits are implemented at 2 levels : 
-	- Global limits apply accross all clients. Any accepted deals from any clients will be counted in the same bucket. If that bucket exceed the limit, nor more deals are accepted. 	- Client limits only apply to that specific client. All deals of that specific client are counted to evaluated if new deals should be accepted. When a limit is set on a client; both the client and the global rate limit are evaluated.
+	- Global limits apply accross all clients. Any accepted deals from any clients will be counted in the same bucket. If that bucket exceed the limit, nor more deals are accepted. 	
+	- Client limits only apply to a specific client. All deals of that client are counted to evaluat if new deals should be accepted. When a limit is set on a client; both the client rate limit and the global rate limit are evaluated.
 
 {{< alert icon="warning" >}}
 The global limits should be set to the maximum ingestion capacity of the miner.
 {{< /alert >}}
 
-These limits are applied to any clients registred and unknown.
+These limits are applied to any clients registred or unknown.
 
-Any new deals are rejected until the limit of accepted deals is exceeded.
+Any new deals are rejected as long as the limit of accepted deals is exceeded.
 
-For configuration of the global limits, navigate to the `Settings` section, specifically under `Global rate limits`.
+For configuration of the global limits, navigate to the `Settings` > `Global rate limits`.
 
 {{< img src="global-rate-limits.png" alt="Configure the global rate limits" >}}
 
 Various rate limits can be configured:
 
-- **Number of storage deals per hour**: The maximum number of storage deals accepted over the last 60 minutes, across all clients.
+- **Number of storage deals per hour**: The maximum number of storage deals accepted over the last 60 minutes.
 - **Cumulative storage deal size per hour**: The maximum cumulative storage deal size (GiB) accepted over the last 60 minutes.
-- **Retrieval deals per hour**: The maximum number of graphsync retrieval deals accepted over the last 60 minutes, across all clients.
+- **Retrieval deals per hour**: The maximum number of graphsync retrieval deals accepted over the last 60 minutes.
 
 {{< alert icon="warning" >}}
-Limits are calculated over the last 60 minutes and reevaluated in real time o each new proposal received.
+Limits are calculated over the last 60 minutes and reevaluated in realtime on each new proposal received.
 {{< /alert >}}
 
 {{< alert icon="tip" >}}
@@ -64,12 +65,12 @@ To configure the start epoch sealing buffer, navigate to the `Settings` section,
 
 {{< img src="start-epoch-sealing-buffer.png" alt="Configure the start epoch sealing buffer" >}}
 
-For example, if the value set is 24, it means all deals with a `start epoch < current chain epoch - 1880 (number of epochs in 24 hours)` will be rejected
+For example, if the value set is 24 hours, it means all deals with a `start epoch < current chain epoch - 1880 (number of epochs in 24 hours)` will be rejected
 
 {{< alert icon="warning" >}}
-The value must be expressed in hours
+The value is expressed in hours
 {{< /alert >}}
 
 {{< alert icon="warning" >}}
-It's possible to define start epoch sealing buffer for any registerd clients. To set client specific option, just edit itt
+It's possible to override the start epoch sealing buffer for any registerd clients. Simply by editing the client.
 {{< /alert >}}

content/en/storage-providers/manage/permissions-and-users/index.md

@@ -11,29 +11,30 @@ weight: 206
 toc: true
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-## Claim multiple miners
+## Managing multiple miners
 
-A CIDgravity account boasts the capability to efficiently manage multiple miners, providing users with seamless toggling between them.
+A CIDgravity user can manage multiple miners, providing users with seamless switching between them.
 
-To claim new miner, you can navigate to the `My Addresses` section located under your profile picture in the top navigation bar
+To claim new miner, you can navigate to the `My Addresses` section located under your profile picture in the top navigation bar.
 
 {{< img src="list-of-claimed-addresses.png" alt="List of my claimed addresses" >}}
 
 To initiate the claiming process for a new address, simply click on `Claim a new address`
 
-This action will redirect you to a series of steps. For a comprehensive overview of these steps, [you can conveniently refer to this link.](../../get-started/claim-a-miner)
+Click here for more info in the [standard claiming process]({{< ref "storage-providers/get-started/claim-a-miner/index.md" >}})
+
+Up to 10 miners can be amanaged by the same account. If you are looking to manage more miners. Reach out to us. 
 
 ## Manage user permissions
 
-The concurrent management of a miner by multiple users is facilitated within the system. 
+Multiple users can manage the same miner. Each user will have to claim the miner individually. Any option and setting are attached to a miner. Changes from one user will immediately apply.
 
-To see and manage the users with access to a particular miner, navigate to the `My Addresses` section situated under your profile picture in the top navigation bar.
+All users accessing a miner have the same rights level.
 
-Simply click on the key icon associated with the desired miner to review permissions. 
-This action triggers the opening of a modal displaying a comprehensive list of users and their respective access privileges.
+### Remove access rights
 
-{{< img src="list-of-users.png" alt="List of users who manage a specific miner" >}}
+User access rights can be removed by 
+	- navigating to `My Addresses` section under your profile picture in the top navigation bar.
+	- clicking on the key icon associated with the desired miner to review permissions. 
 
-{{< alert icon="tip" >}}
-You can easily revoke access for undesired users by clicking on the trash icon adjacent to their email address
-{{< /alert >}}
+{{< img src="list-of-users.png" alt="List of users who manage a specific miner" >}}