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Yandere Or Not #4553
Yandere Or Not #4553
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This sentence is a bit odd grammatically. It starts as a question, but by the time it reaches the end, it's a statement. I shortened it a little bit to try to make it flow better.
"Well, it {i}was{/i} me who manipulated everyone and everything to be with you... FOREVER."
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For lunulae's sentence, it'd be "Well, it {i}was{/i} I who..." not "Well, it {i}was{/i} me who..."
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I don't think this is an appropriate follow up to the player shouting.
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We derandom topics that ask a question and store the response, which is what you've done here, but the original topic wasn't one that asked a question. It looks to me like you added more to the topic and threw it off track.
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Yes, but this options seem natural in this topic, and I think throwing it off track seems more natural than creating a new topic for this question. I think it would seem artificial, if new topic was added just for this question and that throwing this topic off track is a better option.
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I would mix up these 4 expressions a bit.