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user-guide/01-getting-started/01-assembly_guides/01_pioreactor_20ml_v1.1/03-v11-wetware-assembly.md

@@ -54,17 +54,17 @@ The vial holder of the v1.1 comes in two halves; a top vial holder and a bottom
 
 1. Insert the other end of the flex cable <Highlight color={colors.red}>below the O-ring and into the groove</Highlight>. Pull it through. 
 2. <Highlight color={colors.magenta}>Apply pressure</Highlight> on the back of the heater PCB so that it lies flat on the O-ring. Maintain this pressure for the next steps.
-3. Flip the holder and insert the <Highlight color={colors.green}>two flat M2.5-CS 5mm screws</Highlight> into the holes. 
-4. **While maintaining pressure**, take turns screwing each in until both are secure, and the heater pcb is securely attached to the bottom vial holder. 
+3.  **While maintaining pressure**, flip the holder and insert the two <Highlight color={colors.green}>M2.5-CS 5mm screws</Highlight> into the holes.
+4. **While maintaining pressure**, take turns screwing each in until both are secure, and the heater PCB is securely attached to the bottom vial holder.
 
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 <AssemblyInstructionBlock title="Step 5: Placing the heating pad" images={["user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/sticky-side.png","user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/remove-blue.png","user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/remove-blue-2.png"]}>
 
-1.	Remove the _clear_ plastic from one side of the thermal pad.
-2.	Place on the flat (aluminum) part of the heating PCB. Apply downwards pressure to secure it.
+1.	Remove the _clear_ plastic from one side of the thermal pad. This exposes a sticky side on the thermal pad.
+2.	Place on the flat (aluminum) part of the heating PCB. Lightly apply downwards pressure to secure it.
 3.	Remove the blue protective plastic on top of the thermal pad.
 
 

user-guide/01-getting-started/01-assembly_guides/01_pioreactor_20ml_v1.1/04-v11-faceplate-all-together.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ The fan and top faceplate come assembled - leave them together. If they are not
 
 1. Push the <Highlight color={colors.red}>fan onto the top faceplate</Highlight>, orienting it such that the wire is pointing towards the button. 
 2. Place the vial holder on top of the <Highlight color={colors.green}>four ends of the 30mm screws</Highlight>. The screw ends should fit into four holes on the bottom of the vial holder. The flat flex cable should follow the <Highlight color={colors.orange}>arrow on the faceplate</Highlight>.
-3. Holding it together, finish screwing the <Highlight color={colors.blue}>silver screws</Highlight> on the bottom of the faceplate. The screws will enter square nuts in the vial holder. Do not overtighten.
+3. Holding it together, finish screwing the <Highlight color={colors.blue}>30mm screws</Highlight> on the bottom of the faceplate. The screws will enter square nuts in the vial holder. Do not overtighten.
 
 :::caution
 You should not feel resistance when tightening the screws into the square nuts. If you encounter resistance, unscrew and inspect the screw for any plastic debris. 
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ You should not feel resistance when tightening the screws into the square nuts.
 
 <AssemblyInstructionBlock title="Step 3: Button extension" images={["user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/apply-force-button-extension.png", "user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/completed-button-extension.png"]}>
 
-The top faceplate now comes with a button extension to provide easier access when pushing the button. 
+The top faceplate comes with a button extension to provide easier access to pushing the button.
 
 1. Flip over the assembly.
 2. Insert the 10mm screw into the hole under the button extension.
-3. Place <Highlight color={colors.red}>one finger behind the extension</Highlight> and <Highlight color={colors.magenta}>apply torque with the other hand</Highlight> until the screw is secure in the hole. This may require a lot of force.
+3. Place <Highlight color={colors.red}>one finger behind the extension</Highlight> and <Highlight color={colors.magenta}>apply torque with the other hand</Highlight> until the screw is secure in the hole. This may require some force. Once established, you can use a screwdriver to finish screwing it in under you feel sufficient resistance.
 
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@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ The top faceplate now comes with a button extension to provide easier access whe
 <AssemblyInstructionBlock title="Step 4: Putting it all together" images={["user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/attach-assembly-to-hat.png", "user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/screw-assembly-to-hat.png",
 "user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/fasten-heater-cable.png", "user-guide/hardware-assembly/upgrade-version/connect-pwm-one.png"]}>
 
-1. <Highlight color={colors.blue}>Place the vial holder assembly onto the Raspberry Pi/HAT</Highlight>. The GPIO pins align with the side notch of the faceplate.
-2. Using the <Highlight color={colors.red}>6mm screws</Highlight>, attach the top and bottom pieces in each corner.
-3. Check that the screw for the button extension is in the right position. 
+1. Place the vial holder assembly onto the <Highlight color={colors.blue}>Raspberry Pi/HAT's corners</Highlight>. The GPIO pins align with the side notch of the faceplate.
+2. Using the <Highlight color={colors.red}>M2.5 6mm screws</Highlight>, attach the top and bottom pieces in each corner.
+3. Check that the screw for the button extension is in the right position and not prematurely compressing the button under it (you should feel a "click" when pressing the button extension). Temove the top and screw in the M2.5 10mm screw more if you detect a problem.
 4. Open the <Highlight color={colors.orange}>flat flex cable connector</Highlight> on the HAT by pulling the tabs outward, like done previously. Insert the flex cable copper-side up.
 5. <Highlight color={colors.green}>Push the tabs inward</Highlight> to secure the flex cable.
 6. Insert the stirring power connector into <Highlight color={colors.magenta}>PWM channel 1</Highlight> (unlabelled).