Add important note about headnode domain name, and the following sections: a) Setup SDC-Docker, b) Configure Client Access to CloudAPI #256
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…ions: a) Setup SDC-Docker, b) Configure Client Access to CloudAPI
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Nov 19, 2019
| |Confirm "root" password||| | ||
| |"admin" password|adminpass1|| | ||
| |"admin" password|adminpass1|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.| |
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Password parsing was fixed in OS-7361 (joyent/sdc-headnode@ b5c0e5a5f6e0ed31c6db2573de9b720d851af603), so these comments on passwords are unnecessary (and dangerous).
| |Region of Datacenter|orbit|| | ||
| |Name of Datacenter|coal-1|(Availability zone.) | | ||
| |Region of Datacenter|orbit|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.| | ||
| |Name of Datacenter|coal-1|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.| |
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These should be something like "must be DNS name compliant strings".
| @@ -313,8 +313,7 @@ global running smartlogin online | |||
| adminui0 10.99.99.31 10.88.88.3 | |||
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| We can now access access the operations portal, "SDC ADMINUI", in a web | |||
| browser on the host computer at https://10.88.88.3/ . | |||
| You can now access the Operations Portal (SDC ADMINUI) in a web browser on the host computer at <https://10.88.88.3>. | |||
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All prose should be hard wrapped prior to 80 columns for readability in terminals.
| # Add the SSH key. Substiture real value for {username}. | ||
| sdc-useradm add-key {username} /var/tmp/id_rsa.pub | ||
| ``` | ||
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Lines 348 to 386: All prose should be hard wrapped prior to 80 columns for readability in terminals.
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Add important note about headnode domain name, and the following sections: a) Setup SDC-Docker, b) Configure Client Access to CloudAPI
This PR was migrated-from-gerrit, https://cr.joyent.us/#/c/925/.
The raw archive of this CR is here.
See MANTA-4594 for info on Joyent Eng's migration from Gerrit.
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@khangngu commented at 2018-12-17T23:55:35
@khangngu commented at 2018-12-17T23:55:57
@johnlevon commented at 2018-12-20T16:36:17
Patch Set 1 code comments