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pages/docs/what-is-mixpanel.mdx

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-## Key Mixpanel Concepts
+## Concepts
 Mixpanel is built on three key concepts: **Events**, **Users**, and **Properties**.
 
 ### Events
 An event is a data point that represents an interaction between a user and your product. Events can be a wide range of interactions. 
 
-Imagine you run a cafe, every time a customer purchases a coffee from your café app, there are details that describe the purchase the moment it happens. Actions like purchasing a coffee can be tracked as an event in Mixpanel.
+Imagine you run a cafe where customers can purchases a coffee via an app. Each purchase is an event that can be tracked in Mixpanel.
 
 ![image](/event-1.svg)
 ### Users
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 ![image](/event.svg)
 
-A **User Property** describes a User. This could be their name, email, age, last visit, etc.
+A **User Property** describes a User. This could be their name, email, age, etc.
 
 ![image](/user-profile.svg)