Merge pull request #15 from nblackburn/feature/improve-about-page

Improve about page
nblackburn · Oct 26, 2022 · ce514d0 · ce514d0
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diff --git a/package.json b/package.json
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 {
     "name": "@nblackburn/website",
     "private": true,
-    "version": "1.5.0",
+    "version": "1.5.1",
     "scripts": {
         "start": "astro dev",
         "build": "astro build",

diff --git a/src/components/story.vue b/src/components/story.vue
@@ -4,30 +4,27 @@
             <slot name="image" />
         </div>
         <p :class="styles.paragraph">
-            I'm Nathaniel, it's nice to see a new face around here.
+            I'm Nathaniel. It's nice to see a new face around here.
         </p>
         <p :class="styles.paragraph">
-            I created this little place to share a little about what makes
-            me....well me. My story is perhaps a little different from the usual
-            as i am entirely self-taught. You see, i have always had a love for
-            computers. I started my journey at the age of 13 making little tools
-            for people.
+            My story is a little different from the usual, as I am self-taught.
+            You see, I have always had a love for computers. I started at 13
+            years old making little tools for people.
         </p>
         <p :class="styles.paragraph">
             Being a developer is not easy, especially when you are self-taught.
-            I have been faced so much rejection that it no longer has an effect
-            on me. But here is the thing, you have to keep going and use it as a
-            driving force. I simply wanted to be here enough that i kept on
-            fighting.
+            I have faced so much rejection that it no longer affects me. But
+            here's the thing. You have to keep going and use it as a driving
+            force. I wanted to be here enough that I kept on fighting.
         </p>
         <p :class="styles.paragraph">
-            My aim is simple, i love making people happy in any way i can. This
-            website is one of reflection to show off some of those things in the
-            hope that they can reach others.
+            My aim is simple, I love making people happy in any way I can. This
+            website is one of reflection to share some of those things I have
+            worked on in the hope that they can reach others.
         </p>
         <p :class="styles.paragraph">
-            Have a look around, stay a while and let's build something
-            beautiful....together.
+            Have a look around, stay a while, or reach out. I would love to hear
+            from you.
         </p>
     </div>
 </template>