Revised text access.md

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source/content/remote_service_features/access.md

@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ This is a crucial feature remote services provide and is handled somewhat somewh
 We will discuss this feature in some more detail in the section [Organizing Projects](../organizing_and_more/index.md#organizing-projects) but in short:
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-Remote services like <i class="fab fa-gitlab"></i> GitLab and <i class="fab fa-github"></i> GitHub, do not just allow repository owners to give access to a repository they host, but they offer:
+Remote services like <i class="fab fa-gitlab"></i> GitLab and <i class="fab fa-github"></i> GitHub, not only allow repository owners to grant access to hosted repositories, but they also offer:
 
-- **fine grained access control** to both content and functions or actions
-- provide controlled **access on organisational levels** ranging over multiple repositories
-- allow to **further distribute access** rights
-- **protect certain resources** (e.g protected `main` branch)
-- **automate access control** by integrating with enterprise identity providers.
+- **fine-grained access control** over content, functions and actions,
+- controlled **access at an organizational level** across multiple repositories,
+- the ability to **further distribute access** rights,
+- **protection for specific resources** (e.g protected `main` branch), and
+- **automated access control** though integration with enterprise identity providers.