edits in radio article

thairanaru · Jul 28, 2024 · ff057c2 · ff057c2
1 parent b668cfd
commit ff057c2
Show file tree

Hide file tree

Showing 2 changed files with 12 additions and 11 deletions.
diff --git a/internet-radio.html b/internet-radio.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
 <body>
   <h1 id="a-case-for-internet-radio">A Case for Internet Radio</h1>
-  <h3>Published on 2024年7月26日</h3>
+  <h3>Published on 2024年7月26日 and last edited on 2024年7月27日</h3>
   <label for="color-scheme">Color scheme:</label>
   <select name="color-scheme" id="color-scheme" class="color-scheme">
     <option value="system">Default</option>
@@ -29,15 +29,13 @@ <h3>Published on 2024年7月26日</h3>
     <option value="retro">Retro</option>
   </select>
   <br>
-  <p>A different way to listen to music have been forgotten: music radio.
-    Although some of us may might have listen to the radio in the car, in
-    the digital world, it is easy to get accustomed to listening songs in
-    demand and making your own music playlists in music platforms like
-    Spotify and Youtube. There is nothing wrong with that. I have been doing
-    that for years and still do. However, for the past couple of months, I
-    have been trying out internet radio too. Despite its limitations,
-    internet radio provide a viable alternative music listening experience
-    to modern streaming services.</p>
+  <p>
+    A different way of listening to music has been forgotten: music radio. Some of us may have listened to radio in the
+    car, but modern streaming services like Spotify and YouTube have been growing more popular.
+    There is nothing wrong with music on demand. It allows you to listen to your own playlists with your own songs. I
+    have been using it for years, and I still use it today. However, I have been trying out internet radio for the past
+    couple of months. Despite its limitations, internet radio provide a viable alternative to modern streaming services.
+  </p>
   <h2 id="why-radio">Why Radio?</h2>
   <p>Internet radios give a predetermined program of music to listen to.
     Although being unable to choose your songs may seem like a flaw at
@@ -156,6 +154,8 @@ <h2 id="ending-notes">Ending Notes</h2>
     to internet radio 20% of the time when I am in the mood to listen with music with more variety. Thanks for reading
     and feel free to
     give me any feedback.</p>
+  <!-- <br> -->
+  <!-- <p>Shoutout to Pinkie for helping me edit this piece.</p> -->
   <br>
   <p xmlns:cc="http://creativecommons.org/ns#">This work by <span property="cc:attributionName">thairanaru</span> is
     licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/4.0/?ref=chooser-v1"> Creative Commons

diff --git a/style.css b/style.css
@@ -325,6 +325,7 @@ body {
 }
 
 h1 {
+  /* background-color: var(--bg2); */
   text-align: center;
   margin-top: 0;
   color: var(--text)
@@ -494,4 +495,4 @@ select {
 
 * {
   /* color: red */
-}
+}